Comments on: The First Glimpse on The Matrix: GTA Vice City http://pezseyes.edublogs.org/2008/03/25/the-first-glimpse-on-the-matrix-gta-vice-city/ Enter the Matrix: You are the One Wed, 15 Apr 2009 12:00:11 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Clay Burell http://pezseyes.edublogs.org/2008/03/25/the-first-glimpse-on-the-matrix-gta-vice-city/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Clay Burell Thu, 10 Apr 2008 00:00:00 +0000 http://pezseyes.edublogs.org/2008/03/25/the-first-glimpse-on-the-matrix-gta-vice-city/#comment-3 Are you ignoring my feedback? What I told you to do should take maybe ten minutes max. Are you ignoring my feedback? What I told you to do should take maybe ten minutes max.

]]> By: Clay Burell http://pezseyes.edublogs.org/2008/03/25/the-first-glimpse-on-the-matrix-gta-vice-city/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Clay Burell Thu, 27 Mar 2008 01:23:00 +0000 http://pezseyes.edublogs.org/2008/03/25/the-first-glimpse-on-the-matrix-gta-vice-city/#comment-2 A great start (finally ;) )! I think future reviews would be clearer to me if what you were talking about is what I'm seeing at the same time - the cheating codes, the cops coming after you, the escape menu stuff - it would be clearer if i saw it while you talked me through it. If the music is copyrighted, you risk it disappearing because YouTube deleted it. Check out GarageBand and iMovie for making your own soundtracks via loops (and of course I'm glad to help you). You should also write an intro to your review, maybe start a tradition of ranking them with stars or thumbs up type things, etc. Nice to see you finally moving. You still owe me a lot of stuff for backwork :) A great start (finally ;) )!

I think future reviews would be clearer to me if what you were talking about is what I’m seeing at the same time – the cheating codes, the cops coming after you, the escape menu stuff – it would be clearer if i saw it while you talked me through it.

If the music is copyrighted, you risk it disappearing because YouTube deleted it. Check out GarageBand and iMovie for making your own soundtracks via loops (and of course I’m glad to help you).

You should also write an intro to your review, maybe start a tradition of ranking them with stars or thumbs up type things, etc.

Nice to see you finally moving. You still owe me a lot of stuff for backwork :)

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